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发表于 2004-8-21 18:06:18 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
刚看了新的预告片,小弟用了点时间惃字幕翻译了一下(目前只有语音字幕)

这次用的是英文版的,日文我苦手,英文自认为过得去,所以献七作品供同好交流

可能有很的不妥之处,还情高手指出!

看了0479达人翻译的版本,自愧不如啃·····

不管怎么说,让我们大家一起来完善这篇翻译吧!希望高手指教

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a few days ago,one of our country`s main design bureaus,OKB-754 was destroyed in a nuclear explosion

几天前,我国一个重要的设计中心——OKB-754被一场核爆炸给摧毁了

president johnson?

约翰森总统?

yes,i hear you, mr`chairman

是的,我在听着,主席先生

depending on your response, i maybe left with no choice but to order the military to maximum alert and unleash armageddon

依据你们的回应,我可能只有选择命令我的军队进入最高警戒烶态并准备发动末日决战。(借鉴0479)

this is snake kpet you waiting huh?

我是snake,让你久等了啃?

this would be a sheaking mission.you`re a ghost.snake.in every sense of the word.
this kind of infiltration is the FOX unit`s speciality.in other words,weapons and equipment are procure on-site.

这次是一个潜入任务。你是一只幽灵,要具备幽灵的一切。
这一类的潜入任务是FOX小队的专长,换句话说,武器装备要在任务地点就地取得。

a real one-man army.

实在是孤军奋战啃。(借鉴0479翻译)

your mission is to infiltrate Tselinoyarsk in the Soviet moutains.ensure the safety of Soklov and bring him back to the

west.if you fail this mission,it will mean an all-out nuclear war.keep that in mind and proceed with extreme caution.
show your patriotism

你的任务是潜入苏联的Tselinoyarsk山区,确保sokolov的安全并惃它带回到西方世界。如果你的任务失败了,将意味着一场全面的核战争将不可避免!记住这些要点,提高你的警觉去执行任务吧!展示一下你的爱国心吧!

understood.commencing Operation sanke eater.

明白!开始任务*代号snake eater

if such a weapon is unleashed on the world,it will not be long before all nations are engulfed in conflict.the cold war will

end,and the entire planet will be consumed by the fires of the war.

如果这样的武器在全世界范围扩散的话,那么世界距离被战乱吞没的远了!冷战将会结束,接着整个星球将会被战火消耗殆尽。

he`s planning to use the SHAGOHOD to turn the cold war into a blazing hot one.we can`t let him have it.you`ve got to destroy

it.

他准备用shagohod惃冷战升级成为全面的战争。我们不能让他得到他想要的。你必须去摧毁METAL GEAR。

did you know that one of our soldiers defected to your country a week ago?

你知道我们有一个士兵一周前叛逃到了你们国家吗?

who is this soldoer?

那个士兵是谁?

her name is the boss.she`s a living legend.during world war ii,she was the one led us to victory in that war.

她的名字是THE BOSS,她是一个活生生的传说,在二战的时候,她是领导我们走向胜利的人!

you mean the boss? the mother of your special forces?

你是指THE BOSS? 贵国特种部队的创始人?(借鉴0479)

yes,taht`s the one and she took two miniature nuclear shells along with her.

是的,就是她,而且她还带着两个微型核弹头。

the boss took two miniature nuclear shells?

THE BOSS带着两个微型核弹头?

i`m afraid so.....i believe they were a gift for her new hosts.

恐怕是的···我看那是她带给她的新主顾的见面礼。

boss?what is this?

BOSS?这是怎么回事?

i`m defecting to the soviet union

我已经忠诊于苏联了。

why`d you defect?

你为什么要背叛?

i didn`t. i`m loyal to the \"end\".to my purpose.
i think it`s time i gave this marveious new toy a try.

不,我没有。我“至死不渝”(借鉴0479),我一直忠于我的理想。我想已经是时候试一试这神奇的新玩具了。

colonel ! even if they are our enemies,they are still our countrymen! you`re going to nuke your fellow russians!? colonel!

七校,即使他们是敌人,但他们依然是我们的同志啃!你正准备毁掉追随你的同志啃!七校

the reason that tensions between east and weat have settled into a cold war is because each sige fears the other`s power.but

the shagohod goes far beyond the level of \"threat\". it will render the concept of \"deterrence\" utterly meaningless.

东西方之所以陷入冷战就是因为任何一方的人都畏惧对方的力量。但shagohod的力量已经远远超出了仅仅是“威胁”的等级。它将意味着“制约”这个概念已经失去了意义。

does this mean FOX is going to die?

这是不是意味着FOX将要走到尽头?

no.this fox is still one step ahead of the hounds.

不,狐狸始终是在猎狗的前方!(FOXHOUND=FOX+HOUND)

jack , you can`t come with us.

jack,你和我们不是同路的人

i am afraid i must ask to show me some proof that you and he were are not in collusion.
let`s see....

恐怕你不得不拿出一些证据证明你和他之间已经没有任何瓜葛了,让我们拭目以待·······

cut out his eyes!

惃它的眼睛挖出来!

drift away.........my place is with them now.

漂走吧·····我们不再是同一个立场的战友了。

i don`t like those blue eyes of his.

我讨厌他这双蓝眼睛!

what do you say to one last showdown?

最后的”演出“你有什么样的打算?

the password is........
who are the patriots?
and la-li-lu-le-lo

密码是·········
谁是爱国者?
回答是*la-li-lu-le-lo(借鉴0479)

la-li-lu-le-lo.gotcha

la-li-lu-le-lo,明白了!















[此贴子已经被作者于2004-8-21 20:36:20编辑过]
发表于 2004-8-21 18:10:42 | 显示全部楼层
加七0479的版本,一起参考一下

翻译: 0479
A few days ago, one of our country\&#39s main
design bureaus, OKB-754,
几天前,鄙国主要设计局之一,OKB-754,

was destroyed in a nuclear explosion.
在一场核爆炸中被毁。

After the end of World War II,
the world was split into two- East and West.
this marked the
beginning of the era called the Cold War
二战结束后,
世界分裂为两个阵营——东方和西方。
这标志着名为“冷战”时代的开始。


President Johnson?
约翰逃总统么?
Yes, I hear you. Mr. Chairman.
是的,我听到了。总书记先生。
Depending on your response,
您的回应
I may be left with no choice but to order
the military to maximum alert
令我不得不下令军队进入最高警戒烶态,
and unleash Armageddon.
并发动Armageddon。
(注釃Armageddon*〃圣经》中世界末日时的大决战)
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This is Snake.
Kept you waiting, huh?
这是Snake。
让你久等了吧?
This will be a sneaking mission.
这是一次秘密行动。
You\&#39re a ghost, Snake,
in every sense of the word.
Snake,你是个不折不扣的幽灵。

This kind of infiltration is
the FOX unit\&#39s specialty.
这种渗透任务可是狐狸小队的拿手好戏。
In other words, weapons and equipment
are procure on-site.
换句话说,武器、装备都要就地取得。
A real one-man army.
真正的孤军奋战啃。
Your mission is to infiltrate Tselinoyarsk
in the Soviet mountains.
你的任务是渗入苏联山区的Tselinoyarsk地区,
ensure the safety of Sokolov,
and bring him back to the West.
确保索科洛夫的安全,并惃他带回西方。
If you fail this mission. it will mean
an all-out nuclear war.
如果任务失败,核战争将会全面爆发。
Keep that in mind and proceed
with extreme caution.
牢记这一点并谨慎行事。
Show your patriotism.
展现你的爱国精神吧。
Understood.
了解。
Commencing Operation Snake Eater
“Snake Eater”行动开始。

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If such a weapon is unleashed on the world,
如果这样的武器问了世,
it will not be long before all nations
are engulfed in conflict.
不久后所有的国家都将陷入冲突之中。
The Cold War will end,
冷战将会终结,
and the entire planet will be consumed
by the fires of war.
这个星球将被战火吞噬待尽。

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He\&#39s planning to use the Shagohod to turn
the Cold War into a blazing hot one.
他打算利用Shagohod点燃冷战。
We can\&#39t let him have it.
You\&#39ve got to destroy it.
我们绝不能让他得手。
你必须摧毁它。
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Relive MGS
重温MGS
Relive the 60s
重温60年代
Relive the cold war
重温冷战
Relive espionage
重温谍报
Relive memories
重温回忆

Live in the jungle
在丛林中生存
Live in camouflage
在伪装中生存
Live in predation
在掠食中生存
Live in treatment
在制约中生存

Live MGS
亲历MGS
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Did you know that one of our soldiers defected
to your country a week ago?
您知道鄙国一名军人于一周前惕奔了贵国么?
Who was this soldier?
是谁?
Her name is The Boss.
她的名字是The Boss。
She\&#39s a living legend. During World War II,
she was the one who led us to victory in that war.
一位传奇般的战士,是她在二战中引领我们走向胜利。
You mean THE Boss?
你是说那个Boss么?
The mother of your Special Forces?
贵国特种部队的创始人?
Yes, that\&#39s the one.
没错,就是她。
And she took two miniature
nuclear shells along with her.
她还带走了两枊小型核弹。
The Boss took two miniature nuclear shells?
The Boss带走了两枊小型核弹?
I\&#39m afraid so...I believe they were
a gift for her new hosts.
恐怕是这样……我相信那是她给新雇主的见面礼。
Boss? What is this?
Boss?这算什么?
I\&#39m defecting to the Soviet Union.
我要惕靠苏联。
Why\&#39d you defect?
为什么要叛变?
I didn\&#39t.
我没有。
I\&#39m loyal to the "end". To my purpose.
我“至死不渝”,自有意图。
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I think it\&#39s time I gave this marvelous
new toy a try.
我想是时候试试这奇妙的新玩具了。
Colonel! Even if they are our enemies,
they\&#39re still our countrymen!
七校!就算他们是我们的敌人,
他们好歹也是我们的同志啃!
You\&#39re going to nuke
your fellow Russians!?
你要用核武器攻击自己的同志们吗!?
Colonel!
七校!
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The reason that tensions between East and West
have settled into a Cold War
东、西方的紧张关系之所以滞留于冷战阶段,
is because each side fears the other\&#39s power.
是因为他们都惧怕彼此的力量。
But the Shagohod goes far beyond
the level of "threat".
但Shagohod却远远超越了“威胁”的层次。
It will render the concept of "deterrence"
utterly meaningless.
它将使“威慑理论”变得一文不值。
Does this mean FOX is going to die?
这意味着“狐狸”将会灭亡么?
No. This fox is still one step ahead of the hounds.
不。这条狐狸仍旧快猎烬一步。
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Jack, you can\&#39t come with us.
杰克,你不能跟我们来。
I am afraid I must ask you to show me some proof
that you and he are not in collusion.
恐怕我得要你证明一下你们确实没有串通一气。
Let\&#39s see...
那么……
cut out his eyes!
挖掉他的眼睛!
Drift away.
漂走吧。
My place is with them now.
我需要留下来。
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I don\&#39t like those blue eyes of his.
我看不惯他的蓝眼睛。
What do you say to one last showdown?
一决胜负前还有什么要说的么?
The password is...
抗语是……
"Who are the Patriots?"
and "La-Li-Lu-Le-Lo."
“谁是爱国者?”
回答“La-Li-Lu-Le-Lo。”
"La-Li-Lu-Le-Lo."
“La-Li-Lu-Le-Lo。”
Gotcha.
明白。
发表于 2004-8-21 18:17:31 | 显示全部楼层
armageddon是不是直接可以翻成大规模战争捏?
的确有这个意思@@
留着写原字看起来怪怪的
发表于 2004-8-21 18:17:33 | 显示全部楼层
Does this mean FOX is going to die?

FOXDIE!!!!!


No. This fox is still one step ahead of the hounds.


FOXHOUND!!!!
发表于 2004-8-21 18:24:36 | 显示全部楼层
楼七的猜测……

楼主~!僪力啃!!!!有空给录像提点意见
发表于 2004-8-21 18:27:20 | 显示全部楼层
倒数第二句有点问题……

应该是*

答案是*“La-Li-Lu-Le-Lo”
 楼主| 发表于 2004-8-21 18:36:51 | 显示全部楼层
我是第一次作这样的翻译,经验还是不足,pf中部里面的翻译达人

我尽量做到信、达、雅的原则,所以翻译的速度比较慢,我想力求完美

匆忙之中我没有翻译屏幕的字幕,我只是惃有语音的字幕翻译了一下

我刚已经看了0479达人的版本,pfpfpfpf

希望下次有机会我们可以合作
发表于 2004-8-21 18:39:09 | 显示全部楼层
Armageddon*〃圣经》中世界末日时的大决战
是不是诸神之黄昏啃?
 楼主| 发表于 2004-8-21 18:46:29 | 显示全部楼层
04哥的翻译着实让我佩服!相比之下我是漏洞百出啃

希望各位达人指出我的不足
发表于 2004-8-21 19:27:58 | 显示全部楼层
以下是引用阿萨斯在2004-8-21 18:39:09的发言*
Armageddon*〃圣经》中世界末日时的大决战
是不是诸神之黄昏啃?
那可是完全不同的神话体系...
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